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A story.
I could hear them moving in the dark. They were more than one - more than five. All I wanted was peace but my enemies wouldn't have it. They wanted my blood. I sat and turned on the lantern and there they were exposed to my glare. The fools moved toward me as though I was no threat and tried their best to take my blood. I came unchained. As each approached they died in the light of my lantern, beaten down and crushed by the strength of my hand. I laughed as I saw the dead bodies lying around me in a mixture of my blood and their broken carcasses. I put my head back on my pillow. Stupid bugs!
~ Unsure of the weight jump. Controlled myself very well during the camping trip... mostly.
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81,2 kg
Bisher verloren: 2,7 kg.
Still to go: 1,8 kg.
Diät befolgt: Recht gut.
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1644 kcal
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Fett: 73,93g | Eiw: 124,97g | Kohlh: 88,96g.
Frühstück: Maple Syrup, Cinnamon, Quaker Old Fashioned Oats, 2% Fat Milk, LeanFit Whey Protein Shake - Vanilla, Espresso Coffee, Unsalted Butter Stick. Mittagessen: LeanFit Whey Protein Shake - Vanilla, Espresso Coffee, Unsalted Butter Stick, Egg. Abendessen: Corky's Bar-B-Q Pork Ribs, British Columbia spartan apple. mehr...
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Zunahme von 1,0 kg pro Woche
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 Kommentare
Hahahahahahahaha! Thanks, needed that! I'm glad you survived :)
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: Socolova
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07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: UmmBilal
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ROFl...what a great way to start my day thanks bunches. Congrats on the loss and keep up the great work!
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: spiritspell
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Chuckles in the morning... love it.
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: dboza
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Nice story. Feels good to kill those buggers before they fly off at least. Now, you could have let them suck about .6 lbs of blood first. :)
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: jmb3450
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We have mosquitoes the size of a 747 in Minnesota!
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: HCB
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I must be a delicacy because the lil buggers love me and never ever bite my husband.
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: Pterath
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you are a great writer! I enjoyed reading
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: dialla3201
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hahaha what a great read.
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: Daynia611
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jmb that's not a bad idea. Would leaches work as well? HCB we have Airbus size in BC.
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: northernmusician
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Funny story with a great opening! Had to cringe though through the second to last sentence - not nice lol. Would it be OK if I show this to my Grade Tens in September? Would be fun to have them write a creative narrative about their summer.;-)
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: Bible Bliss
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I have no problem with you using it. I love words. If you can use it to the benefit of kids (I know. They'd hate me for calling them kids), go for it. You can have them find the run-on sentence as well if you like.
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: northernmusician
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Nice writing, NM...truly enjoyed it....when you first started I
wondered if we were going to hear a "blow by blow"account of
...a recent battle with. "starchy carbs." LOL...THANKS for sharing!!!!
07 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: SuccessThisTime58
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Good one. I can't wait to go camping. Too much rain so far this summer.
08 Jul 15 vom Mitglied: rockytu
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